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Open Poetry #46
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pinkfrog462
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since 2010-09-24
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0 posted 2010-10-17 01:03 PM

Move


Puddles of mud

All around me

Where to I step

Where do I go from here

I can either walk through the mud

And risk getting wet

Or I can stand still

And do nothing at all

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2010-10-17 04:19 PM

You give the impression of being the one who does not hesitate to move ... even if it's through the mud.

Well done.

Margherita
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