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Bamboo love |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Bamboo love Raindrops play my skin in rhythmic flagellation, echoes from careless whispers wet my perceptivity. Heart petals open to absorb the healing touch of soul filtered tears. In silence I move through this liquid embrace of nature’s lullaby. Trees bless my passage with sympathetic bows inviting me to listen. Within the falling rain I hear the sound of my love for you as it grows and grows swiftly like bamboo in ceaseless power shoots upon everlasting roots. I keep walking and wonder if you can hear this sound too? To know I lean into the wall of this soothing waterfall from where your voice springs and plants a feeling of wings into the core of me. Uncontainable like the rain the awareness rises from my soul into my brain that within the core of you you do hear that sound too. Just when we think we have consumed it all it sprouts again and again as precious as ever for me and for you just as swiftly as bamboo ... * |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
That was wonderful, loved the concept and the sounds and the images.....ebm |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar... as if the eyes are bound by bamboo vines here...subtle shibari sensual.. |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Great poem and especially loved the ring it had to it! ooxx Marti
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ahh, my friend...I caught "the bump"...  And just for that, here's a little gift from Hawaii...  with love... like the bamboo. [I swear, I thought I could hear it growing!] |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Dear one,I do not know how you keep coming up with these beautiful words. But keep on, as I love to read them. P.S. A corner of my yard shared with three other yards is full of tall bamboo giving that corner a bit of privacy and some interesting small animals. latearrival |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
This was very nice. Thank you. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Very beautiful... the rain sound is also the sound of applause!  And I can relate to rain with bamboo, too. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely doen ma'am... bambo, being a grass is an interesting plant and an interesting metaphor for something that grows.... like the way you've mixed sound into the imagery.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all so much for your loving comments, dear Poet friends! Thank you for the beautiful picture too, dear Karilea. Love, Margherita |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Margherita....lovely read, this was beautiful...you've place a soul in nature, one of which was always there, but most of us are way to busy to notice....that voice and caress of sun, moon, air and all that resides within...lovely |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Raindrops play my skin in rhythmic flagellation, echoes from careless whispers wet my perceptivity. Heart petals open to absorb the healing touch of soul filtered tears. In silence I move through this liquid embrace of nature’s lullaby. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That is just poetically beautiful, the feelings seep through the page with the softest touch. Fabulous poem, Margherita~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you from my heart, dear LeeJ and dear Lori, for your loving generous comments. Love, Margherita |
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