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Illusion |
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pinkfrog462 Junior Member
since 2010-09-24
Posts 26Arizona |
Illusion The room is silent All I can hear is my heart beating I feel as if My life is defeating I try to stand up I want on my own But my inner most thoughts Are quite unknown I shun the world I hide from within I see her My twin She stands tall Mighty and proud As she enters Goes wild the crowd I inflict this deep sorrow And she lets out a scream Then I awake She was only a dream For more poems visit my website at www.wordsbybeth.com |
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Novus_Os Member
since 2010-07-21
Posts 115West Coast, USA |
Powerful. The dream turned into a nightmare. I can feel the deep set emotion, and sorrow here. Well done. Regards, Novus_Os Life is meant to be enjoyed, not just endured. |
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pinkfrog462 Junior Member
since 2010-09-24
Posts 26Arizona |
thank you! For more poems visit my website at www.wordsbybeth.com |
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