I am fram (inspired by Amaryllis)

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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

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0 posted 2010-09-24 11:59 AM

I am fram, I am the god of your machines
I suck the dirt from your blackened blood
and my lungs give you breath
free of the dust of demons

I fit your tractor like loving gloves
wearing the seeping of your orifices
against my jutting threads
like a weaver impaling digits

I sort perfume from beemer leather
and drink the flavors of warm
til they are finger print saliva
invisible to your pios eye

your liquor of octane drunkens me
but still I swallow your gallons
as the keeper of your inner cooling
and the guardian of your secret emissions

I am fram, I sip and suck and swallow

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daark (scribblenote: fram is a brand of filters for air, oil, gas vehicles)

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

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1 posted 2010-09-24 12:33 PM

Love your carma! Your torque on the topic was one of a kind...BIG SMILES in your rear veiw! ebm

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2010-09-24 01:15 PM

thanks ms ebm

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2010-09-24 04:15 PM

made me smile this afternoon~~

M

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2010-09-24 04:16 PM

ms MMs...always a pleasure to make you smile, thanks ms

Margherita
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5 posted 2010-09-24 04:28 PM

Wow, that's some extraordinary "fram" story! Curious: I just exchanged a filter in my kitchen today ... love that new candid view ... but now I will look at it and it will whisper to me "I sip, I suck, I swallow!"

How you come up with such ideas! There is more to it than appears and it gives you a hue of samaritan ... how precious ... a filter!

Great job!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2010-09-24 05:02 PM

ms mar....they are used for cars and trucks mostly over here...but who knows where all fram gets stuffed these days...thanks lady

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01

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7 posted 2010-09-25 08:37 PM

LOL!!! I like your twist on things!
Kat >^..^<

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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8 posted 2010-09-25 08:54 PM

I'm so sorry, I'm sitting here, giggling...

FRAM...an oil filter.

Whoops, nope, won't go. The "I am" poems have to deal with REAL...people.

But then, that's just my definition, but I do have to provide a writing for an Anthropomorphism challenge in our poetry group...

heh...this might do, very well! Fram you!

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

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South Africa

9 posted 2010-09-25 10:38 PM

Considering how much we filter during the course of one lifetime I think this is pretty apt and, of course, very well written.

Helen

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2010-09-26 04:15 AM

ms kat, thanks so much..

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ms sun, thanks lady friend I always enjoy reviews fram you

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ms honey, thank you and yes the filtering seems eternal

Cpat Hair

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11 posted 2010-09-26 10:42 AM

Good old Fram... friend of many an engine

very creative sir... and as always very well written

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2010-09-27 06:03 AM

thanks amigo

kindredspirit
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13 posted 2010-09-27 01:18 PM

Brilliant. I love the imagery.

passing shadows
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14 posted 2010-09-27 01:20 PM

thanks for reminding me my oil needs changed

Dark Stranger
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15 posted 2010-09-27 01:30 PM

kindred...thanks for the review..

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nms dixie..my pleasure to keep you inframed..thanks babe

Martie

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16 posted 2010-09-27 04:50 PM

Wondering what a DS poem unframed would read like...I really enjoy your original take on this.

Dark Stranger
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17 posted 2010-09-27 05:38 PM

ms martie..thanks sweet neighbor

Amaryllis
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18 posted 2010-09-28 03:52 PM

Lol! Love it! Never knew Fram had so much to say...!

Leave it to our own Mr. Daark to bring a fresh twist to the topic... wonderful read, D!
Best~
Amaryllis

Dark Stranger
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19 posted 2010-09-29 11:54 AM

thanks lady

Alison

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20 posted 2010-10-01 02:12 AM

I laughed.

A

Dark Stranger
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21 posted 2010-10-01 06:49 AM

ms ali-san, I knew you would..thanks lady

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