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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2010-09-30 10:41 AM


it was provocative of how creation
perhaps the restless adam there
under his eave in service to heaven
counting freckled stars on evening bosom
reciting names to sooth his mind to slumber

then ribbed by a most playful god
and given a helper with appealing eyes
and secret sighs for serpentine pleasures
that she could entwine perhaps as tattoos
then write into her writhing wrong doing

and having known the texture of the fig
how it itches the skin as does the nettle
and then to cover the already itching
with such foliage as to agonize that craving
and make shuddering a convulsive essential

then calling it sin to want if it was wanton


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daark

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Eusta B. Mae
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1 posted 2010-09-30 12:08 PM


Nice romp in the garden D. ebm
Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2010-09-30 12:46 PM


very cool work amigo...
  like your take on the garden here.

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2010-09-30 12:56 PM


ms ebm, thanks for clicking on the fruit here

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cpat, thanks amigo

Margherita
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4 posted 2010-09-30 07:16 PM


What a rich reading experience, dear D.!

You created exceptional and thought provoking lines.

Freedom of Eden
divine plan of innocence
contemplates pleasure




Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2010-10-01 06:50 AM


ms mar, thanks lady friend
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