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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it was provocative of how creation perhaps the restless adam there under his eave in service to heaven counting freckled stars on evening bosom reciting names to sooth his mind to slumber then ribbed by a most playful god and given a helper with appealing eyes and secret sighs for serpentine pleasures that she could entwine perhaps as tattoos then write into her writhing wrong doing and having known the texture of the fig how it itches the skin as does the nettle and then to cover the already itching with such foliage as to agonize that craving and make shuddering a convulsive essential then calling it sin to want if it was wanton ______________ daark |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Nice romp in the garden D. ebm |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very cool work amigo... like your take on the garden here. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ebm, thanks for clicking on the fruit here _____________ cpat, thanks amigo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
What a rich reading experience, dear D.! You created exceptional and thought provoking lines. Freedom of Eden divine plan of innocence contemplates pleasure  Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend |
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