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The Crisp of Autumn’s Promise
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The Crisp of Autumn’s Promise |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
The crisp of autumn’s promise Sworn on the midnight wind Summer’s swelter’s come to an end Long sleeve sweater’s warming bliss From the season’s changeling chills Too early for turning tree’s splendor Budding chrysanthemums still green and tender Across valley and hills Patch worked cut hay sachets Scent lowland rising mists Recalling hot cocoa and ciders missed During summer’s long hot days |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Morning now breaks like a Jonathon just picked and bitten with snap of color letting the sweet sap of afternoons run upon the chin of September |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Wow! You just made my mouth water and my stomache growl. Good stuff! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah... just a few words inspired by your own fine offering ma'am... crisp and autumn can hardly be used without remembering the orchards of Missouri and how the sweet/sour of a freshly pisked apple was the taste of fall and of changing season... |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England |
I find myself smelling the conifer scent on the mist & waiting for the trees to blaze, although where I live they're starting to already...beautifully described. Julie |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
Wow, you're an impressionist. You've captured the scene with your own delicate touch. Truly a Monet of words. |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
naturegirl-I'm glad you enjoyed! ebm ----------------------------------------- Bastet- Oh how you humble me with your compliments...bless your heart and many thanks. ebm |
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