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Novus_Os
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since 2010-07-21
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0 posted 2010-09-17 01:42 AM




In springtime there rings out the buzzing
of bees.Pollen drifting by wayward, from an
allergic sneeze.Soon enough after, comes
a warm summer breeze. Comforting, gentle,
and blowing with ease. Like a masterful
swing on a high strung trapeze. Followed
discreetly by the drifting of leaves.
Colored brown, red, and orange, pulled
from autumn time trees. Then swift
flowing waters, all harden, and seize.
Transformed into ice due to cold winter's freeze.
So come as you will,or go as you please.
Yet don't fail to notice life's intricacies.


Life is meant to be enjoyed, not just endured.

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Nan
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1 posted 2010-09-17 09:07 AM


As we step into autumn's colorful embrace, your words are a wonderful reminder to stop and enjoy nature's gifts.  Thank Novus_Os.

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Eusta B. Mae
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2 posted 2010-09-17 09:48 AM


I like the way you handled your rhymes in this delightful poem. ebm
Amaryllis
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3 posted 2010-09-17 12:45 PM


How lovely, and I love the part about the allergic sneeze... too true!  
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Best~
Amaryllis

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