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September Rain
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September Rain |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Rumbling up September sun Into midnight lights That streak across the sky Dropping tapping dancers Into the wild wind fly ‘Till dawn bows the mist Of the rain moving on |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
I wish I could write like that  -- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness! |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
lovely~~I can feel the drumming rain in this ~~~ ~niiice |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
rosepetals36- No you don't, because you would have to be me and that would suck for you. I like the way you write and by the time you are my age you'll be writing circles around me. -------------------------------------------- bel1e-Thanks for feeling the read and letting me know. Bless your heart. ebm |
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BeyaK Member
since 2008-08-07
Posts 126Philippines |
Short yet a lovely read... nice one =) ~~*K. B.*~~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eusta....I like the way you see and how you are able to capture it in words. Lovely! |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
Sweet EBM ... actually I was looking for the one about crazy. anyway I went to look for you there, but you weren't here. Then I looked for you here but you weren't there. Then I finally figured it out. You are sitting in front of your monitor at this very moment, looking in your computer at this very moment right now. So steps out of the computer to give you a hug. This is Daddy Goose!!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This one is simply perfect, my ears loved it! Love, Margherita |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Tympani and rhythms of the season approaching... love that image of tap dancers in the silver spangle of rain. Musical poetry and maybe a hint of resolve? ~Karen |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Heralded by the screech of rusted tin on changing wind the tap dance of drops falls short of harsher spring September sheds her Joseph's coat letting colors begin the fade as she washes in runnels over window panes see.... your imagery inspires... enjoyed ma'am.. greatly! |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
BeyaK-Thanks for the read! -------------------------------------------- Martie-You praise means alot, thank you! -------------------------------------------- Sweet Daddy!...Hugs, Hugs, Hugs!!! ------------------------------------------ Margherita- God bless your ears! ------------------------------------------ Karen- thanks for your kind words and comments -------------------------------------- Cpat-thanks for letting me know my little words created a little spark..Bless your heart. |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Beautimous. (I know, I know, that`s not a word. Well it is, today!) Love this, and have September rain outside my window today, also... very fitting . Best~ Amaryllis |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kind of febtemberary here too today.. enjoyed your seasoning ms |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Amaryllis-apparently spellcheck thinks I make up words too. Glad you liked this one. -------------------------------------------- D-thanks for the eyes here. ebm |
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