navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #46 » The Music Teacher
Open Poetry #46
Post A Reply Post New Topic The Music Teacher Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2010-09-12 07:06 PM



I'm teaching future minstrel sons
Dedicated beyond compare
When the music from an ancient time
Seems to take my heart somewhere
Above the smog and darkness
Above the eagles high
To a place beyond the tragic
To eclpise my soul and mind

Chorus:
So my best is what I'm sharing
An most won't understand
The notes that fill a canyon
Are saved for special hands.

So I think about my license
My poetic just embrace
And I realize I know enough
To turn knowledge into grace
But some can't grasp ability
An get lost in the task
And complicated scales of love
Make their human will collapse

Chorus:
So my best is what I'm sharing
An most won't understand
The notes that fill a canyon
Are saved for special hands.


So I think about what to do
And I find it in my heart
To give out special words of praise
To those that try the art
Like healing comin over them
A warm and soothing oil
I point them in a different way
And free them from the toil


Chorus:
So my best is what I'm sharing
An most won't understand
The notes that fill a canyon
Are saved for special hands.
Medium rock tempo fade..........

© Copyright 2010 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2010-09-13 12:11 PM


wonderful musical notes you've penned, your message is a sensitive and caring one.

Great to read you again, ethome~

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2010-09-13 05:24 PM


Dear Eric, it is so nice to read you again.

I think you are a blessing to those who learn from you.

This is most beautifully expressed and has a great sound!

Love,
Margherita  

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2010-09-17 06:51 PM


Thanks Margherita and Blues, I appreciate the visit and the comments....Eric
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #46 » The Music Teacher

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary