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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
You are my private thought my earnest evening prayer a memory that's sought so beautiful and rare You are my dearest wish sweet whisper on the wind the most inspiring kiss my soul mate & my friend You are indeed my everything my dream, my life, my heart your love has blessed me with these wings may we never part You are indeed my private thought my earnest evening prayer in this rapture I am caught forever shall I care... ~Sunkissed  |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Very beautiful and moving! Enjoyed. Kat >^..^< |
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OldBuddyOldPal Member
since 2008-12-15
Posts 87 |
I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
mmmm ... YOU are definitely captured it seems. This is extremely lovely. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sounds like he has you right where you want him...kewl dance ms |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
~~~exquisite~~~~ Truly a heavenly piece of poetry~ |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Thanks everyone for the kind words, I truly appreciate them all. ~Sunkissed |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Ya know, I collect books--which require book markers. And this little gem would be perfect, laminated on pretty paper with a tad of watercolor and a slip of silk ribbon. Sweet sentiments to cherish. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
This is is constucted well and flows smoothly. The last stanza wraps this poems up well. |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
Love has its wonderful moments doesn't it? I liked.-- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice m'friend... you are the queen it seems of the romantic... |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Kat, thank you so much! OldBuddyOldPal, you are far too kind, thank you! Margherita, It's always nice to see your thoughts here. Dark, sounds like your right. *smiles* Blues, Such an honor coming from you. thank you! rwood, you paint a nice picture. I could see that! *chuckles* thank you so much. Earl, thank you for the kind words. Rosepetals, indeed love does. Glad you liked. Captain, though I don't think I deserve it, I thank you for such a lovely compliment. *hugs* ~Sunkissed |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Excellent romantic writing, Sunkissed. Ida |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Thank you, Ida, for looking in and the kind words. ~Sunkissed |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A precious and well written poem..enjoyed..thank you.. Friendship is Love without his wings. Lord Byron. |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Many thanks, Goldenrose. ~Sunkissed |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England |
You had me at...You are my private thought So simply and beautifully expressed. I absolutely love this poem, thank you for sharing it with us. |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Thank you so much, NatureGirl. Glad that you liked. ~Sunkissed |
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