I could see you between the lights

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Open Poetry #46

I could see you between the lights

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2010-09-12 04:46 PM

I could see you between the lights
Beneath the earnest wind you
Gave a long brow, a long invite
Into your slow moving mouth

Much like the rain that peddles
ItÕs way down the avenue of your hair
Down the avenue of the road
That leads to a place that
Only I can softly rinse your thick, brown hair.

A small window game we played.
Where we leaned our heads against the glass,
And watched our eyes field
The slow air as it passes our necks
Along the boroughs of grass,
Right hand to hip,
Smile to night,
Between the lights.

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

1 posted 2010-09-13 12:32 PM

Ah, the lip reading window games of youthful adults on the go. This is well-painted and I did enjoy reconstructing the scene mentally. An enjoyable, if bittersweet, read.

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