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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2010-09-12 03:52 AM


To be awake but not awakened
and, oh, this is a merry life
that keeps one in the mire
of reality’s conspiracy.

And then there is the light
but no enlightenment
and knowledge but no wisdom
and love but no loving.

Peace is there somewhere
but no peacefulness
because it cuddles up to joy
and hides in discontent.

Let it be known I know
how great we are to live this farce
and play-act with intensity
the simulated genuine.

But of the genuine who knows
if ere upon a dusty shore
if will rise in true force, effect,
and stand as one triumphant?

Let it be known I don’t know
but maybe in a future time
there’ll be a misfit speck of past
that shows I should have known.

The awake, enlightened, wise,  
the peaceful and the joyous,
all specks within the folds of time
that one day will make a … whole!

Helen / 12 September 2010


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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2010-09-12 03:59 AM


Love youyr ponderings, Helen. "Let it be known" that similar thoughts have crossed my mind but you express the beautifully.
                                   Ida

Honeybunch
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2 posted 2010-09-12 04:08 AM


Thanks, Ida.  I sometimes ponder the merits of pondering but then I just give in and carry on pondering.  

Helen

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2010-09-13 03:20 PM


Yep, your pondering is contagious.

Good on ya, Honey~

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
4 posted 2010-09-13 04:03 PM


Thanks Bluesy!  Maybe that's the purpose of it all because I sure don't have any answers.


Helen

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
5 posted 2010-09-13 05:19 PM


The poem is an answer in itself, dear Helen Poetess.
You do so well in spreading the awareness, my friend!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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