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Open Poetry #46
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Elric
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since 2010-08-24
Posts 43
southbend, WA
0 posted 2010-09-10 06:50 PM


Im drowning in my own self-pity.
The water rushes over me.
I can't breathe.
I can't move.
I am speechless.
I am hopeless to fight agianst it.
As soon as you are gone so is the water.
I yell out everything I wanted to say.
It is all wasted breath.
Next time you come around.
I feel the water rushing in once agian.
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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
1 posted 2010-09-10 09:01 PM

I know this feeling, and you've expressed it well.

Nobody's perfect, but some are less so than others... as Voltaire once penned (in French, of course!), at the very least love those who love you, and defend against abuses!
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