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Open Poetry #46

to be with You

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2010-09-06 01:07 AM

to be with You

If I could come
to Rome
it would be in the summertime
when the fountains
seem to flow with wine
where lovers kiss
sweethearts they missed
and in the late afternoons
we would drive to the country
and frolic naked in the vineyards
and for those
sensual moments of time
I would be yours
and you would be mine.

JamesLee
03September
2010

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2010-09-06 03:43 PM

James, your sweetheart is in Rome?

This is very lovely and made me smile ... "naked in the vineyard" you imagine? Well, now the grapes are ripe ... I am not sure if you could dare to do that!

But, as you remember well there are the fountains ... to plunge into if you are ready to pay the fine if some vigilant sees you!

A Hawai man dreaming of coming to Rome for a romantic encounter must have a good reason for sure!

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2010-09-06 10:53 PM

Thank you Margherita for the nice response...didn't you hear, they have nude grapevines as they have nude beaches, alas I am just playing around with my imagination...James

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2010-09-07 02:13 PM

Thanks James for the lovely words and imagination, a very enjoyable read, Rome is a beautiful city and the vineyards surely would welcome you... great work.

yann

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

4 posted 2010-09-07 03:42 PM

Enjoyed the thoughts and images expressed here, James.

lovely!

~Sunkissed

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

5 posted 2010-09-07 09:12 PM

How could anyone resist a romantic poem like this? Nice work.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2010-09-08 12:32 PM

Are all Hawaiin men as romantic as you are?!? If so, I'm heading for the land of pineapples!

Linda

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