Open Poetry #46 |
The middle part |
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Not as bad as death row, not as good as paradise, and yet an island visited to stand on solid ground. It’s the middle part before the sway and a place no one can stay for like the sea it rises, sinks, and the sand moves underfoot. What’s good, what’s bad? No mind can know when like an island buffeted or calmed by passing fancy. And so that “try, try again” for constancy, stability, a never ending flex, relax, until all the facts are known. But facts are like graphs and charts drawn by own perceptions and that island’s just a place I go to experience the flow ~ until paradise found and known to be here on my death row! Helen / 5 September 2010 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
We all have our islands where we feel grounded and safe, but we never settle down there ... Always appreciate your thought process, so eloquently rendered, dear Helen. Love, Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It’s the middle part before the sway and a place no one can stay for like the sea it rises, sinks, and the sand moves underfoot. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That verse speaks to me so loudly, as if the earth moved and rocked me gently~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dear Margherita - Thanks. I'd like to settle there, you know, but for some reason it seems to have been bumped off my wish list. Helen |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Bluesy gal - I'm glad it was a "gentle rock". The earth seems to be moving rather strongly in certain places of the world but I think if I was the earth I'd also like to ... shake people off. Hugs Helen |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very interesting thoughts, Helen. Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ah, yes. The ho hum 'inbetweenedness' of it all. Fear not, Bunches of Honey. Your land of paradise awaits! ~ and may it be just around the bend! Love 'n a hug, Linda |
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