Open Poetry #46 |
of ebony and pale candy |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you were brazen colored in shy lovely once you put on my most gloving glances and saw how they fit the woman of you so much better than any other lady like you offered me one of those smiles too the kind that make your lips shimmer and suggest they are coated with honey or maybe even something sinfully sweeter we spoke of things we would taste together and try out on and for each other until we might be too weak to continue but would hope the other would want more then there was laughter in our fingertips as we spoke of our mostly deeper secrets and found we had been in the same dreams doing the things we didn't dare speak of until we whispered against our own windows ___________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (09-07-2010 09:31 AM).] |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Your poem inspires soft sighs, Dark. Beautiful! ~Sunkissed |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
D.Your pieces are tethered temptations. ebm. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunkiss..thank you lady friend. I appreciate your glance. __________ ms ebm, thank you for leaving fingerprints here |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely penned sir... as always a journey... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks cpat...I appreciate the window glace |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yep...I needed this. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mmm goody ms sun....I am pleased to address your kneads...thanks babe |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Some great lines as usual - once you put on one of my gloving glances - and saw how they fit the woman of you - and that third stanza is a winner |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks EB...I am blessed by your reads |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lusciously lovely! Oh, those "gloving glances"... EA |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ea...thanks for watching |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
I liked -- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness! |
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