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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2010-09-07 07:21 AM


you were brazen colored in shy lovely
once you put on my most gloving glances
and saw how they fit the woman of you
so much better than any other lady like

you offered me one of those smiles too
the kind that make your lips shimmer
and suggest they are coated with honey
or maybe even something sinfully sweeter

we spoke of things we would taste together
and try out on and for each other
until we might be too weak to continue
but would hope the other would want more

then there was laughter in our fingertips
as we spoke of our mostly deeper secrets
and found we had been in the same dreams
doing the things we didn't dare speak of

until we whispered against our own windows

___________

daark


[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (09-07-2010 09:31 AM).]

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Sunkissed
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1 posted 2010-09-07 08:01 AM


Your poem inspires soft sighs, Dark.

Beautiful!

~Sunkissed

Eusta B. Mae
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2 posted 2010-09-07 08:33 AM


D.Your pieces are tethered temptations. ebm.
Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2010-09-07 09:33 AM


ms sunkiss..thank you lady friend.  I appreciate your glance.

__________

ms ebm, thank you for leaving fingerprints here

Cpat Hair
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4 posted 2010-09-07 12:02 PM


nicely penned sir...
as always a journey...


Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2010-09-07 12:13 PM


thanks cpat...I appreciate the window glace
Sunshine
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6 posted 2010-09-07 05:28 PM


Yep...I needed this.




Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2010-09-07 05:42 PM


mmm goody ms sun....I am pleased to address your kneads...thanks babe
Earl Brinkman
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8 posted 2010-09-07 09:07 PM


Some great lines as usual - once you put on one of my gloving glances - and saw how they fit the woman of you - and that third stanza is a winner
Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2010-09-07 09:30 PM


thanks EB...I am blessed by your reads
Earth Angel
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10 posted 2010-09-08 12:35 PM


Lusciously lovely! Oh, those "gloving glances"...


EA

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2010-09-08 12:40 PM


ms ea...thanks for watching
rosepetals36
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12 posted 2010-09-08 12:54 PM


I liked

-- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness!

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