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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2010-09-04 10:29 AM

Time Flies
Time flies
Life is short
Yet we don't know
How time goes by
Sometimes
It is hard to know
The days gone too fast
As we don't recall the past
Weather changes into time
As years passes by
Seasons changes
As we go on our separate ways
As I sit down
Listen to our song playing
On a radio
I recall our memories
While it is raining down here
Looking at it
Remind me of the times
We used to be together
Time flies
We never knew

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

1 posted 2010-09-04 12:51 PM

Wistful.. enjoyed reading. Time does fly in retrospect, which is a great reason not to waste it (nor any worthy gift or talent, especially of another).

Good writing! I freudian typo'd "wrioting" as your poems are often full of barely controlled joy.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2010-09-04 04:16 PM

m'friend.. time does indeed pass..
you marked it well.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2010-09-04 09:27 PM

nicely done... enjoyed.

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

4 posted 2010-09-05 02:08 PM

Enjoyed the read

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2010-09-05 06:03 PM

Vandana...

It is so good to read you again.

Time flies, indeed!

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

6 posted 2010-09-05 06:53 PM

nicely written.
enjoyed your poem.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2010-09-06 01:04 AM

Enjoyed...James

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2010-09-06 10:32 AM

Very nice my friend and I just love the last three lines!!

jwesley

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2010-09-06 06:10 PM

In the rain memories come flowing ... and time indeed flies.

Very nice, dear Vandana.

Love,
Margherita

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

10 posted 2010-09-06 08:28 PM

Time does go too quickly. I guess life is what we make of the time that we have remaining. I am glad I spent time reading this poem.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2010-09-06 09:07 PM

A song sure does bring back those times of our life.

Like we are there again, if only for the moment.

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