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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08
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0 posted 2010-09-06 10:31 AM


They keep us alive,
and if they're not good enough...
they will kill us;
just like a heartbeat of zero.

They set our dates
for the new life inside of us.
The time kills us
when that accident finds us.

They make us go insane
when the number on the scale
just isn't low enough.
The world kills us with numbers.

"Just 10 more pounds!"
they scream at us.
When will it end..?
When will they be the last 10?

Numbers keep us living,
and numbers slowly kill us.
They bring us to insanity...
so when will we fight back?


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julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2010-09-06 05:16 PM


Oh, those numbers! I can relate , but still I do love numbers. They take us to untold heights too ...

Nice job!

Love,
Margherita

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08
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2 posted 2010-09-06 05:24 PM


Haha, yes...those numbers.
Thanks!

julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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3 posted 2010-09-06 06:09 PM


"they" can only bother you if you listen...I go by the weight of the soul since the worms take care of the rest...enjoyed your exposure here
Just.Another.Falling.Star
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4 posted 2010-09-06 07:48 PM


Thank you very much, Dark Stranger

julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell

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