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Shapeless Wind |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Summer comes to a ripple of waves where palms bend and sway beneath leafy shadows diffusing the heat rising changing sands from warm topaz to cameo blending into cool gray. Drifting wood widdles away worn and smooth sea shells fade to pastel shades natures beauty lies adrift like soft cotton caressing the shapeless wind. Calm passes in the silent stillness like a whispered hush in slow motion beneath a crescent moon rising settles down low in the summer sky. Moved by the endless turning of tides. |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Oh Blues, this is gorgeous... so windswept and beachy... I love it  ~A |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Summer comes to a ripple of waves where palms bend and sway beneath leafy shadows diffusing the heat rising changing sands from warm topaz to cameo blending into cool gray. truly love the opening lines..and the rest of course, but these lines with your addition of color, the contrast of heat and cool and use of cameo.. truly are fine... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Calm passes in the silent stillness like a whispered hush in slow motion" your words build a feeling quiet and smooth. this is lovely. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What a lovely beach scene, Blues. So calming and reassuring.I can almost hear the waves washing up on the shoRe. Ida |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Amaryllis, cpat, Sweet Lady, and Ms, Madness, Thanks to each of you for leaving your nice replies, I appreciate it very very much. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Lori, I think the moon reaches for you to kiss your front for creating such a magical scenery with your poem! Absolutely gorgeous in its entirety. Love, Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand-fine imagery! excellent 'write' !! |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
I enjoying this .and love the ending |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautiful Bluesy, your poem is beautiful! You do know that, don't you?  Helen |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue...I enjoy the view of your eyes on this penspeak.. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Thank for letting me leave Kansas to briefly enjoy a more salty clime. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You all are just so nice and your comments mean a great deal to me. I am really happy you guys stopped by, thank you so much. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
How relaxing and peaceful....Well done!! Eric |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
The title caught my eye, but the body of the poem blew me away. Excellent writing, Blues, enjoyed much. ~Sunkissed |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
quote: This is my favorite stanza here, with the word play and then the title lines. Enjoyed reading this work! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
you are a seaside song |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
glad to see this 'write' appear again near the top of the "P.I.P.-land by the cyber-sea" queue! continuing applause for this fine 'penning' !! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Gee thanks again for all your positive feedback, I am so appreciative. big group hug~~ |
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