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You're not a loner
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You're not a loner |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
You're not a loner A lot happens, and not much seems to change who knows what goes on in the worlds behind this screen in the hearts, the minds, the friends, the lovers... here, or those that have come and gone My thoughts, my mind, my heart always spinning, always working, always thinking of those not here never alone, never a want to be lonely my mind, my effort, my mission of making others happy and yet I I sit here in the dark another night alone not so different from those others in the 38 previous years and who knows what tomorrow brings maybe a change, maybe the same old thing. and so silence silence I feed and here in the dark a wall to talk to a page to write on never lonely with thoughts of my friends maybe feeling a little unloved but never, never alone. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Your not alone, you have everyone here at PIP! Nicely written. Kat >^..^< |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
You sum up this online age as well here as Frost predicted it (indirectly) with his "Grex, not sex" comment. Well, we never really do walk alone, but some times it seems lonelier than at others. Thanks for the good read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can relate well here |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Good capture of emotion that is easy to relate to.ebm |
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