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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Your embrace your eyes your manly scents my sighs Heart beats on the rise your words my sighs Your skin so fair your fingers in my hair Your love no surprise "one more dance?" I sigh ~Sunkissed  |
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Nocturnal Pulse Member
since 2010-08-12
Posts 84Australia |
Aww, that's beautiful. |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Thank you, Nocturnal! ~Sunkissed |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very romantic writes of late. This is tender and sweet ma'am... very nicely done |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Thank you, Captain. What can I say? I was inspired. *smiles* ~Sunkissed |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
Very sweet I liked.-- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness! |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Thank you, Rosdpetals, so nice of you to say... ~Sunkissed |
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irmirt Junior Member
since 2010-06-09
Posts 18 |
Wow, I wish I heard the voice of ladies I danced with. Nice visit to memories gone by! Thanks. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'll have what you're having! Sounds mighty fine to me! Sighing, here...   EA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yummm...James |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Irmirt, I'm sure the ladies you have danced with may have been thinking the same things. Thank you for your comment. Earth Angel, (smiling)I'll bet your dance card is full! *hugs* James, Thanks for reading and for the thoughts  ~Sunkissed |
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