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Open Poetry #46

Keyboard clicks

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

0 posted 2010-08-28 08:28 PM

Keyboard clicks become
raindrops on the window pane,
and coffee grows cool.

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

1 posted 2010-08-28 08:32 PM

Oh I like this; the keyboard clicks `become` can be construed two ways: both the action of `becoming` (turn into) and also the flattery; that the clicks augment the raindrops... (`become`)

Very nicely done
~A

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

2 posted 2010-08-28 08:36 PM

Been there, done that. But it don't often rain here in SoCal.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2010-08-29 05:44 AM

When coffee grows cool
creative minds are busy
enjoying to BE!

Again, an inspiring offering from you. Thank you!

Love,
Margherita

[This message has been edited by Margherita (08-29-2010 07:16 AM).]

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2010-08-29 04:25 PM

I would suspect that many a reader who happens upon this poignant senryu, will be nodding with understanding ~ and compassion.

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

5 posted 2010-08-29 09:30 PM

Thanks to all for your kind words!

Online people do sometimes have a window nearby, and occasionally a rain shower happens by... and your commercially-viable coffee plants do need cool nights to grow well, or so I have read.

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

6 posted 2010-08-29 09:50 PM

Easy1, I agree with EA! So true!

As always, a pleasure!

~Sunkissed

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2010-09-06 10:55 PM

A pleasure to read...James

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

8 posted 2010-09-07 10:37 PM

I'm nodding with understanding- and compassion. Thanks, Linda. I enjoy your writing easy1.
Ida

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