Open Poetry #46 |
have mercy |
Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
~ have mercy ~ walking in mud barefoot woman with child carries the world on her head crying |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Thanks James. The poor people of Pakistan are really in trouble because of all the flooding. It just breaks my heart!
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
The picture illustrates your poem quite well. Nicely done. ~Sunkissed |
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Novus_Os Member
since 2010-07-21
Posts 115West Coast, USA |
Have mercy on all the people suffering. Indeed. Powerful. Thank you. |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Sunkissed - I can barely stand to think of all the suffering in Pakistan but in other places as well. Thank you for reading and responding! ooxx
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Novus_Os - it is just heart-breaking!
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are a deeply compassionate soul, dear Marti. It is indeed terrible what people have to endure ... You say it with the grace and power of your heart. Love, Margherita |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Margherita - Thank you so much sweet lady. My heart just breaks for these people and their government doesn't seem to be doing anything to help them. God help them all. ooxx Marti
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
So much suffering in the world. So sad. Ida |
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Eldest Member
since 2010-06-15
Posts 177Alabama |
so much, in so few words |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marti, the scope of the flooding in Pakistan is beyond all comprehension. You imparted a great deal of emotion in expressing the plight of its people with an economy of words. Linda |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Linda, how I have missed you. Seems like you've been gone forever. Are you okay? love you lots, Marti |
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