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Open Poetry #46
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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2010-08-22 09:25 PM

Sayonara Woman

You were my woman
I was your man
we were crazy
for each other
then you moved
to Japan
I never wanted
you to go
but you went
anyway...
soon a Japanese guy
will win your heart
and brighten up
your day.

JamesLee
21August
2010

Part 1/ Sayonara Woman
Part 2/ Lucky Japanese Man
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Sunkissed
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1 posted 2010-08-23 02:24 AM

I like this, looking forward to your second installment.

~Sunkissed
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2 posted 2010-08-23 11:12 AM

I like this one too, James.

A
bel1e
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3 posted 2010-08-23 02:18 PM

~~great poem!

             
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2010-08-26 07:12 PM

Thank you SunKissed, Alison and belle...second one is coming soon...James
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