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With a Woman's Silence
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With a Woman's Silence |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Is it my imagination? Is it hormones? Is it the rise and fall of the moon, the sun? The spin the spun the revolutions, the runs of the planets, the stars or is it something nearer something less, maybe, something, not so far? Psychic connections the spirit, the chemistry of the blood, and heart? How in the morning one feels down depressed, forgotten more lost than found and in the day, perhaps how information is passed out of earshot, out of sight by something someone, had to say. Information, conclusions, feelings, never conveyed at least not in any normal, convenient, direct, kind of, sort of, way and the heart feels loved again feels full again from someone far away and then the sadness settles as that someone's longing in your absence starts to pervade |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Ah, it is 'Radar Love', and aptly put! You may wish to edit and relocate the partial phrase "the runs", though, just because that reference might not be intentional. |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
lol youre right, it should be just, "the run" |
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