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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
A tropical dawn parade, orange clouds drift by in the baby blue. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Highly enjoyable "reality-effect"! I do love dawn, love to read and to write about it. Love, Margherita |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
very pretty. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Cool write my friend. j. |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
This is very pretty.. I appreciate your use of `baby blue`, which in other context could come off trite, yet is perfectly placed, here.. enjoyed  ~Amaryllis [This message has been edited by Amaryllis (08-19-2010 03:04 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh this is so beautiful, easy1~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dawn wears a pink slip bathing in the morning mist windy mountain peaks~ here's to the dawn and to you good poet! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
artful. yann |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Beautiful! ~Sunkissed |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Thanks for your kind words, Margherita, The Lady, jwesley, Amaryllis, passing shadows, BluesSerenade, 2islander2, vandana, and Sunkissed. It was somewhat challenging to condense description of such a colorful and peacefully composed sky, with clouds "floating" slowly by almost as animated beings, and so lit for only a few minutes of morning twilight. I can imagine the visual memory that skilled painters must possess in order to truly represent such a scene on canvas! |
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