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their thoughts underneath the overpass |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
It slowly turned into a discourse on love. How two souls, across from one another, Breathing the seams of the river Can exchange the slightest wrinkle on their face And understand the simplicity of each otherÕs thoughts. She turned her head slightly; against the brim of the sun, Her blonde locks like olive oil, diving her hands Into his pockets, tilting her neck So she could allow the wind To carry her scent into his thin, pale face. Her strapless, long neck lay into his body Like a soft cold breeze, as the trees quietly slept, They lay perfectly silent. Like a symphony playing its very last note They were two souls on the pitch of the river, Where the vineyards twisted around the bridge Just along the stretch of their bodies, Where a small bridge overpass Waited between the sun Jettisoning the night to see If her lips felt just right. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Just beautiful! enjoyed Kat >^..^< |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now this reminds me of a day long ago... but it was long ago so nevermind great piece! |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Most tender and beautiful.. I always enjoy your style, Tomer ~Amaryllis |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Very good, and I am getting good imagery from this, including both visual and emotional (somehow it is too early in the morning here for olfactory in that way  ). Seeing as it was love, I hope that she was physically satisfied somehow also. |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Kat, thanks for the kind words..Passing, its never too late to find it again. Amaryllis and Easy, much love. Take care Cheers Tomer |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ahhh... this is beautiful Tomer. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, Tomer... I know Michigan, its light, its small lakes, its trees, and silence. But you...found a memory. Good stuff! |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Thanks Lady and Sunshine..happy you enjoyed. Cheers Tomer |
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