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I Just Can't Look
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I Just Can't Look |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan 
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I Just Can’t Look I just can’t look at your eyes saying goodbye. I just can’t hear the words that lead me away from you. I can’t watch arms that should be reaching out for me, hang limp at your side. I know the world turns I know nothing stands still, but how does one sever the life line that keeps you afloat. I want you to be happy but I can’t watch you walk away I just can’t look. Zeitgeist 8/15/10 |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
powerful write poet.. well conveyed sense of loss and the inability to face the arms and eyes that say good bye |
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OldBuddyOldPal Member
since 2008-12-15
Posts 87 |
I don't want to look either. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
looking sometimes makes for great poetry! great writing here! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A very touching offering. This might stir memories in many readers no doubt. Love, Margherita |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
I get the feeling that sometimes it's better not to look. Yet if one really cares for the person who is leaving, look one must. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sad but excellent write, Zeigist. Ida |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
Thank you to all my long time friends here at PiP. I havn't been around much lately because I have been focusing on my music. I will take some time to do some reading and replying to some poetry soon. Zeitgeist. |
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