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Eterne
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since 2010-07-21
Posts 75
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2010-08-13 12:37 PM



Perhaps your heart is full of birds and stars,
lifted by falling in love,
and you are thinking:  It is possible
to sit comfortably on the cloud nine
till the end of time;


or perhaps your heart is too heavy to carry around,
because your lover is gone,
or no longer among us. But you still love:
Your heart cradles the memories of the past days,
your fingertips still sense the touch of their beloved face...


Maybe your heart is like a tree growing stronger each year
amid  the hurricanes, winter storms and  torrential rains
intertwined with sunny breaks,
repeating themselves with the regularity of  passing seasons
- a predictable unpredictability bringing to your heart
strength and flexibility,


or maybe  your heart is like a  red sunset,
breathtaking at the end of a busy  harvest's day,
or like a lake in a forest at dawn,
wrapped in a  shawl of a white mist    
- because your love filled up your heart  
with beauty and peace,
and brought you the quiet joy of existence ...


If you are that person,  if this is your heart,
then  in my poems  you may see your love
in the mirror of mine.

http://eterne-es.blogspot.com/



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Amaryllis
Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306
Mi now
1 posted 2010-08-13 12:42 PM


Achingly beautiful! Such a quiet assurance.. that is the love I am hoping to keep seeing in the mirror for years to come.. thank you for sharing this  
~Amaryllis

katahdin
Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
2 posted 2010-08-13 12:46 PM


Very Beautiful and touching. Enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2010-08-13 03:05 AM


I see, yes

Nocturnal Pulse
Member
since 2010-08-12
Posts 84
Australia
4 posted 2010-08-13 03:20 AM


Exquisite. Although my heart doesn't quite fit into those categories, it was an emotive read. *applause*
Eterne
Member
since 2010-07-21
Posts 75
Quebec, Canada
5 posted 2010-08-14 07:23 PM


Thank you!
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