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Angeltears
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0 posted 2010-08-10 02:55 PM



The voice.

I have a voice in my head,
a voice that say's you are ready,
but i just can't.
I can not tell it to you,
i'm afraid that you don't understand,
and then you'll leave me,
and never talk to me again.
But one thing you should know,
i'll always love you....ALWAYS...



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1 posted 2010-08-10 03:23 PM


Some voices we listen to, others we hear...and fear..

well done... indeed well done..

Angeltears
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2 posted 2010-08-10 04:38 PM


Thank you so much
Hugs Michelle

Amaryllis
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3 posted 2010-08-10 04:45 PM


That is a familiar fear.. that if we speak our love, it may scare the recipient.. and this is a very tender poem, angeltears  
~Amaryllis

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4 posted 2010-08-10 04:56 PM


very good!!

Angeltears
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5 posted 2010-08-11 02:30 PM


Thank's passing shadows
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