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Dreams on a Feather
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Dreams on a Feather |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Dreams on a Feather She could almost taste as tears fell to waist Bitter loneliness Forgotten kindness She felt so heavy she couldn't levy The strength she had lost At emotions cost She was a child Who felt so veiled Her dreams flowed away Just like child's play To think... She could have cured cancer Or became a dancer A dirty mouthed poet who cursed and cussed it But dreams are on a feather Not meant for bad weather So delicate and fair That you can't even bare What a child can do better then you --Juju Dedicated to my nephew everyone is so hard on. (Yeah I know the noun is female.... -Juju |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Love the way you write, my friend. j. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write! Missed reading you! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
This was beautiful Juju, thanks for sharing it with us! Richard xx |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you \\ Love Juju!!! -Juju |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
This is an impressive piece that I should have commented on earlier. |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Sensitive and insightful read, enjoyed it very much! ebm |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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