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morning blouse
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morning blouse |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
I forgave her. Pertaining to her thoughts I gave my mouth to the right side of her belly, Like a small knitted cloth Nestling on the quiet bed of our room, Her green, forest eyes Cradling to a small babies breath Her skin gave way to fall, To the portraits of faceless trees, I sat with her on the chestnut floor, My thoughts pertaining to her white blouse As it gently rested on the floor. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
simply this: oh my! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice...indeed |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I am so liking the feminine romance here! A sheer beauty of a poem, Tomer~ |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
Very elegant, enjoyed. |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Thanks for the replies. Cheers Tomer |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I could picture the scene in my mind. A nice bit of writing here. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Very beautiful. Kat >^..^< |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
Hmmm, I seem to have discovered a new talent. Have I read your poetry before? The mysterious haunting quality really appeals to me. Keep going! |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Yes! ebm |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Appreciate the kind words. Happy you enjoyed. Cheers Tomer |
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