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a life of acceptance
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a life of acceptance |
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Novus_Os Member
since 2010-07-21
Posts 115West Coast, USA |
a life of acceptance Growing life from a confined space, bursts forth into an open place. Seeking to share joy will displace, the sadness that can exist. Fear and doubt tend to interlace. They impede momentum, cause an about-face. Yet to unlock the truth lined case, the key to love must not resist. Yielding to acceptance is not a quick race. Better to take on a marathon pace. Admitting shortcomings is not a disgrace, but nourishment on which to subsist. Life is meant to be enjoyed, not just endured. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Wise words and much deserving of a response. Thank you for sharing your poetry - I will keep my eyes out for more that you share. I believe that all poems here deserve a response - even it is a thank you for sharing. Yours is good and never should have passed by with no comments attached to it. Good job - please continue to share with us. Alison |
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Novus_Os Member
since 2010-07-21
Posts 115West Coast, USA |
Thank you. You made my day. Best Regards, Novus_Os |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
I agree with Alison. Loved the rhymes. Kat >^..^< |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Excellent flow and thoughts. Beautiful! ~Sunkissed  |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
the flow of your words are exceptional, the poem was beautiful, perfect.  |
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Prats Member
since 2010-12-16
Posts 74 |
the poem is wonderful... Prats!!! :D |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Ah, it took me many years to understand the logic of your poem, Novus_Os. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
And yet I think that once we've "yielded to acceptance" everything turns upside down and we start again on that road to acceptance. Enjoyed your words! Helen |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Like this very much Novus Many truths within that blossom out through the negatives of life. "Admitting shortcomings is not a disgrace, but nourishment on which to subsist." "Seeking to share joy will displace, the sadness that can exist." Those are wonderfully positive poetic thoughts and a good lesson for all. Very enjoyable read! Eric |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Good for rhyming! Marathon pace, though? I am sorry about that, for if it's to take that long, something is amiss---and that something not necessarily primarily with the Poet-experiencer here, but with conflicted others, (Thx 4 the bumps on this topic. Was gladdened a little in reading this work and these comments.) |
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