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Dear You,
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Dear You, |
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Danielle Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 80Providence, RI, USA |
Dear You, How's the weather where you are? It's cold and rainy here. I spend my days wishing I was some where warm and my night dreaming of being with you. I keep replaying our last "good-bye" in my mind. Wishing I could go back in time. Would it have been any different if I had made a move? Tried to kiss you ad remind you of all you had to lose. Would it have even mattered? Made it harder for you to choose.. Would you have seen the mistake you were about to make? Things are going well here, everyone is fine. Hope you're staying strong out there, in the middle of the grind. I can't wait for this deployment to be over. To see how things play out. All I want is you home, safe and sound... Love always, Me |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Doesn't sound like there was ever really a choice. Deployment... you go when and where they tell you to... no matter the kisses and pleas that might desire otherwise. Stay strong. Peace to you and yours. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Angeltears New Member
since 2010-08-08
Posts 9 |
Hi Danielle! I liked it verry much  Hugs Michelle. |
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Danielle Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 80Providence, RI, USA |
thank you everyone =) |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
Liked it a lot. Sometimes the hardest of times can produce the most beautiful of words. |
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