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Danielle
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0 posted 2010-08-01 01:37 PM



Dear You,

How's the weather where you are? It's cold and rainy here. I spend my days wishing I was some where warm and my night dreaming of being with you. I keep replaying our last "good-bye" in my mind. Wishing I could go back in time. Would it have been any different if I had made a move? Tried to kiss you ad remind you of all you had to lose. Would it have even mattered? Made it harder for you to choose.. Would you have seen the mistake you were about to make? Things are going well here, everyone is fine. Hope you're staying strong out there, in the middle of the grind. I can't wait for this deployment to be over. To see how things play out. All I want is you home, safe and sound...

Love always,
Me

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2010-08-08 07:40 PM


Enjoyed...James
Andrew Scott
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2 posted 2010-08-08 08:53 PM


Doesn't sound like there was ever really a choice. Deployment... you go when and where they tell you to... no matter the kisses and pleas that might desire otherwise. Stay strong. Peace to you and yours.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Angeltears
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3 posted 2010-08-08 09:01 PM


Hi Danielle!

I liked it verry much
Hugs Michelle.

Danielle
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4 posted 2010-08-08 09:05 PM


thank you everyone =)
Jesse Jaymz
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5 posted 2010-08-12 05:04 PM


Liked it a lot.  Sometimes the hardest of times can produce the most beautiful of words.
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