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The Lady
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0 posted 2010-08-01 01:27 AM





in a remote moment
I see you walk the understory
bare feet clutching soil
listening to the mountain  

I see you where dawn flies
and sugar grass
swollen as rosy sun dew    
wets your mouth

I see you walk the river  
whorls of passion  
stilling your hands
     your fever
    
I see you
in the long quiet fields
the dark stain of night
spreading late green
over your eyes

I see you silent
   the blue blaze of sunrise watching  
   remembering you

then  
in the loss of a single heartbeat
I watch you enter the forest  
ebb

and change the world

© Copyright 2010 Kate - All Rights Reserved
Alison
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1 posted 2010-08-01 01:29 AM


Perfection.


Honeybunch
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2 posted 2010-08-01 11:14 AM


Beautiful!
latearrival
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3 posted 2010-08-01 09:07 PM


This is really lovely. Thank you,latearrival
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4 posted 2010-08-01 10:32 PM


Really like this...James
The Lady
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5 posted 2010-08-01 10:51 PM




Thank you Alison, Honeybunch, latearrival and James.

passing shadows
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6 posted 2010-08-01 11:14 PM


and in a remote moment, I shed a tear
Oklahoma Rose
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7 posted 2010-08-01 11:20 PM


This is just beautiful!
The Lady
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8 posted 2010-08-01 11:25 PM




thank you ladies. her fair and open face stays with me and I think of her when I find myself in the company of trees and rivers, sunshine and rain ...


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9 posted 2010-08-02 10:38 AM


touching...and beautifully done.


secondhanddreampoet
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10 posted 2010-08-03 01:44 PM


wonderful Gaia imagery from one fine poet in tribute to another! ...
BluesSerenade
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11 posted 2010-08-05 09:43 PM


Your write her in all her beauty, and adorn her with pure grace.
And you dear Lady, are one grand, fine poetess.

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2010-08-09 09:55 AM


Lady Kate, I was so pleased to see your beaming face and winsome smile this morning.

Kacy has been sorely missed and you have brought her back to us through your lovely poem and visions. You captured her essence, perfectly.

Love 'n hugs,
Linda



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13 posted 2010-08-09 05:18 PM


This is Kacy and such a fine tribute from somebody who knows the feelings that Kacy had for nature and is able to convey it much as Kacy would....thank you...

Goldenrose.

Friendship is Love without his wings. Lord Byron.

The Lady
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14 posted 2010-08-09 07:30 PM


thank you Cpat Hair.

poet, I appreciate your kind words.

thank you so much Lori.

love and hugs to you dear Linda Angel.  

thank you for your reply Goldenrose

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15 posted 2010-08-10 01:34 AM


I read this before and was at a loss for words, and still am. But I was here...several times.


The Lady
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16 posted 2010-08-11 12:24 PM



thank you for being here Dixie!

Amaryllis
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17 posted 2010-08-11 02:11 AM


Truly beautiful.. I would have liked to have known her. Gorgeous tribute, Lady!
~Amaryllis

Martie
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18 posted 2010-08-12 02:47 PM


Beautifully done!  I have a feeling that she has read this in your heart, and is smiling.
The Lady
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19 posted 2010-08-14 01:42 AM



thank you Amaryllis

Martie, I hope she is smiling. she always made me smile.


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20 posted 2010-08-14 04:01 AM


quote:
then  
in the loss of a single heartbeat
I watch you enter the forest  
ebb

and change the world



Perfect conclusion for a wonderful tribute to our dear Kacy. She was/is indeed someone who contributed to the healing of our world.

Enjoyed this much, dear Kate, true poetess.

Love,
Margherita

The Lady
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21 posted 2010-08-14 09:59 AM




thank you so much Margherita. I always appreciate your comments.
love,
Kate


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