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Misty Lilacs
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0 posted 2010-08-11 11:06 AM




adrift in clouds


still summer morning
a kayak adrift in clouds
dreaming of the lake



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passing shadows
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1 posted 2010-08-11 12:40 PM


love this!!
Misty Lilacs
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2 posted 2010-08-11 01:46 PM


Thanks Dixie! Saw this picture and it reminded me of our kayak trips on our Lake.
BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2010-08-11 08:10 PM


Very cool summer haiku!  
Doesn't get much better than that!!

Misty Lilacs
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4 posted 2010-08-11 09:58 PM


Thanks BS! Love to kayak on the Lake!
secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2010-08-12 08:45 AM


fine imagery in line and photo ...

well done !!

Misty Lilacs
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6 posted 2010-08-12 01:49 PM


secondhanddreampoet, thank you so much for stopping by and reading! Appreciate your thoughts.

ooxx  Marti


"I am using this cane as a fashion statement. It's the newest trend in accessories."

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2010-08-12 02:35 PM


Misty Lilacs - I want to go there, very peaceful and serene. Must be quite the place...

BC

Misty Lilacs
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8 posted 2010-08-12 05:51 PM


Bill, it is a beautiful and quiet place except for the Loons from time to time. Lake Winnipesaukee, NH.

ooxx


"I am using this cane as a fashion statement. It's the newest trend in accessories."

easy1
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9 posted 2010-08-13 11:13 AM


You have magically turned a kayak into a temporary airship. Fascinating!
Margherita
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10 posted 2010-08-13 05:19 PM


Dear Marti, you have caught the magic of anticipation here. This is very lovely.

Love,
Margherita

Misty Lilacs
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11 posted 2010-08-14 12:24 PM


easyone - an imagination, especially with clouds, can conjure up all sorts of images!.

Thanks for replying.

Misty Lilacs
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12 posted 2010-08-14 12:26 PM


Margherita - Love the magic of imagination and anticipation. Thanks my friend for your kind words.
ooxx  Marti

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