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My Promise
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My Promise |
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ILoveTheRain Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 157GA 
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Hold me as tight as you can Tell me everything will be alright I have done horrible things to you It haunts me in my dreams every night You have my heart, soul, and promise Promise that I will never hurt you You deserve more than I have given I love you, please believe that it's *true* I'll do anything for you, baby To stay with you the rest of our life Please forgive me for everything I've done And one day, PLEASE take me as your wife OMG I haven't been on here in FOREVER! Any old faces?? I miss writing.. I go back and read my old poetry and I'm like...wow.. I was good. Haha |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very sweet.... if it is your wish, then i hope he reads and you both find happiness |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Yes, good luck to the author/protagonist on this. Were those unworthy things done so screwed-up as to be beyond restitution somehow? There are always ways to try, though it can be painful, particularly emotionally. This reader just wonders about that a little. An interesting and thoughtful write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you still are good! Don't be a stranger |
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