Open Poetry #46 |
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Ridges - a rewrite (melancholy) |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion ![]() |
Distant lines of geometry, tracing where my heart yearns. Ridges standing in line waiting for me, to receive their call. The first call, a whisper, through pines, around cedars, tempting me to the first ridge, where a symphony of yearning awaits. Standing there, I gaze over and thru the mountains, each named by others, yet each knowing my name. Shhh. Can you hear them, too? I start down through the boughs until the only sound I hear is the sound of my own loneliness. The next ridge awaits just out of reach but just within reach. Shhh.I think it's calling me again. Yes! The next ridge needs me, too. Alas, for now the only ridges I see are those of my past. The ridges call, but only for my youth. |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice to see your words here again... melancholy perhaps, but enjoyed none the less.. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Thanks, cPat. It has been awhile since I've written or read any poetry. I miss that. A recovering addict knows when to step back. |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well sir, you've been missed... but there are times in everyone's life when stepping back is the right thing for them. I understand that very well, and have only recently come back myself. Good to see you.... and if it works out, hope you can stick around a while... |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Melancholy, but so beautiful. A |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
very nice and very nice to see you writing here. latearrival |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Reminds me of the times I use to go hiking in our local mountains as a teen. During the summers I use to go with friends into the mountains for 4 or 5 days at a time... this was before cell phones. I'm sure my mother had more heart attacks than I can count. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
darn... this got me |
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OldBuddyOldPal Member
since 2008-12-15
Posts 87 |
amazing! |
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