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ILoveTheRain
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0 posted 2010-07-31 01:00 AM



In your arms, I stare in wonder
The beauty I see in your heart
Listening to the rolling of thunder
I can hear the beat from afar

Wondrous eyes looking our way
Whispering thoughts of disgust
Lurking around, awaiting the prey
Questioning the amount of trust

The clouds part and the sun shines on
Shedding light on our love
I give myself to only one
Until the day I ascend above

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Loveandlaughter
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1 posted 2010-07-31 02:07 AM


There are alot of good words here. I like the overall feeling of it
passing shadows
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