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For Charlie |
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Eldest Member
since 2010-06-15
Posts 177Alabama |
For Charlie We were inseparable as children, he was only 13 months younger Mom used to say I was his interpreter, as he couldn't talk plain All my life, my brother Charlie was there to talk to and depend on I thought it would always be that way But life isn't always what you think it will be. He left me before I had time to realize he was leaving this world Cancer took him away from me and his family, and took Anna the next year Now there is a hole in my heart and my life, a Charlie-sized hole. We could play for hours, our minds were so alike, we lived in our own world When Mom got sick, he was there for her and for me, so supportive Now they are both gone, and here I am, still trudging on Someday, I know that I will see them again, that's my hope in life I love you, Charlie, you were my friend, my brother, my playmate I will always miss you, no matter how much time passes The tears don't come as often now, but the hurt holds on in a tiny spot It will be there until we are reunited. |
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OldBuddyOldPal Member
since 2008-12-15
Posts 87 |
If Charlie had cancer, it sounds like you probably gave to him as much as he obviously gave to you. How special your relationship must have been. I was diagnosed with cancer in December and have lived through surgery, 4 months of chemo and am just starting radiation. I am sad for your loss and the pain you went through watching him as he dealt with his cancer. I look at my family and friends and sometimes think they are suffering more than I with the fear of what could be. Charlie was courageous. You are brave and strong, too. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"a Charlie-sized hole" beautifully done Eldest |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
it is most difficult loosing loved ones, especially those whom are so close and dear...however, he is still and always will be with you in memory and heartfelt love....you were both blessed to have each other... big hugs Lee J. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Some people just leave big holes in our life when they are gone.... well done poet.. a touching write. |
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OldBuddyOldPal Member
since 2008-12-15
Posts 87 |
Thank you, to the kind person who emailed me with words of support. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Peace to you and yours. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
A touching write. It is difficult to lose love ones. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A wonderful tribute, Eldest. Sounds like you were both lucky to have each other. To express such love for a brother is awesome... |
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