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Open Poetry #46

The Knight and the Maiden

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

0 posted 2010-07-28 04:03 AM

Gone are the days,
of Knights of old
Where love was pledged
by actions of bold

Maidens were saved from dragons in the mist
Knights in shining armor bravely weilded their swords and shyly spoke of a'moir
Glady rewarded with a maidens kiss
A chivalous knight would ask for no more

For the hand of a maiden fair
They would fight to the death
A favored knight - a lock of her hair
Defended her honor until his dying breath

He died in her arms
Her tears kissed his face
She fell on his sword
The knight and the maiden's final embrace

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2010-07-28 06:39 AM

ms kat...after trying to please a maiden all knight and most of the day too..my ass was sure draggin...yep she nearly slew it and didn't even need a sword. grin... enjoyed your romantica ms

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2010-07-28 07:59 AM

this speaks to the ideals and romantic that have followed knights and their ladies forever.....

my question is, can you write how it would be played today? :-)

nicely done.... enjoyed

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2010-07-29 06:26 PM

lovely Kat

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