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of wooden wings |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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before women had wings, she said they were trees along that brim there where heaven reaches down and touches the seams of sky and ground I mostly nodded I guess, without reply my lips and beard were stuck on a smile like it was not fully developed yet just kind of getting around to full grown and men would just climb us for sport or cut us down and stack us around so they could brag to other men about their collections of splinter chips I mostly nodded I guess, without reply just getting around to full groan like it was not fully developed yet my eyes and heart were stuck on her smile and the beguilement of her wooden wings ___________ daark (jaguars of glass) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I just watched a clip from somewhere (duh, India?) I dunno. This 12 yr. old young lady appeared to be squeezing crystals out of her eyes. I didn't care if it was real or not, I loved the poetry of it....her reluctance to cry reminded me of your wooden reluctance to fly? (I could be way off, but you seem like the indulgent type...)  danke' |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Now sir, you mix elements of wood and wing..of women and myth with sensuality... this is good stuff sir..and the series, masterful. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
serene 1..your views are always a treat to see...somehow you fold the pages back and look in/or out of the same windows that I do/did. thanks lady ________________ cpat...humble thanks guy...I appreciate your reviews. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
An interesting take on things not being fully grown, such as the smile that you mentioned. I guess I won`t look on growth in quite the same way from now on. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks eb |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
just back for another read... there is just so much about this I like.. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank ya thank ya berrymuch..am blessed amigo by your reviews |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just smiling |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms dixie..thanks babe |
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