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Cool Crisp Night
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Cool Crisp Night |
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tattooedsweetheart07 Member
since 2010-07-11
Posts 86Pa |
As I sit alone outside on this cold crisp night…. I feel the crisp chill of the winds blow As the ran falls from the heavens it hides the tears that I cry… I sit and ponder So I close my eyes And try to wonder where I shall go I feel a gentle warm touch on my wet clammy shoulder… I open my eyes to find a guy standing beside me Looking at me with caring eyes He begins to speak and he asks why I young woman like me would be sitting alone on this dark cold night I answer him by saying I’m here because I have no where to turn to That my life has on beginning nor no end… That I’m lost somewhere in this great big world with no where to go Then I turn my view back to the ground where I stared before He tells me life’s what you make it That it has many of places to turn You just have to open your eyes and see what you discover For everything here has a beginning and a end I look up at him and say how can I find where I belong if I don’t know who I am He said that all comes in time… He said that I have to find out who I am truly And that once I’m happy I can find where I belong in this world…. And he walks away… I dry my eyes and stand up in the rain… And as I stand there I notice that the rain is starting to clear So I start walking on my path of finding myself And I’ll try to figure out who I really am…. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
I think everyone feels this way at some point in their life. Nice read Kat >^..^< |
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tattooedsweetheart07 Member
since 2010-07-11
Posts 86Pa |
Thank you Kat for reading my poem.... |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Very nice... I hope the rain clears your path for you Life's journey is not to arrive at the grave safely in a well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, totally worn out, shouting, "WHAT A RIDE |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Very good write, and I enjoyed reading your words here. A tie for the rain, and a tie for the clearing! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
life's full of doors... some open, some close..and all we can do is go on.. hoping to learn and grow from where we were. |
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