Open Poetry #46 |
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Awakenings |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! ![]() |
Awakenings As an infinite twilight cloak of stars appears amid a million sounds and scents carried on the gentle evening breeze, this path ends near the forest heart beneath cliffs where clouds are born that invite the spirit to arise and soar from the ruins of a broken heart. --- b. e. adams (7/27/2010) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful, loved taking in the visuals....going back for another read.... |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Beautiful! I like your style. Kat >^..^< |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
I love poetry that is succinct but that also manages to set an evocative tone which I feel you have done here wonderfully. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
sigh... I love that cloak of stars |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Another keeper, Poet. Ida |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
beautiful, elevates the look and seeks solace for everyone. enjoyed my read. regards yann |
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