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Donovan Callinan Junior Member
since 2010-08-01
Posts 37Omaha, Nebraska U.S. |
Intoxicated You say I am not intoxicated dear woman. But my sight is inebriated having drunken in your features. Truly, you are a most intoxicating creature. You say I am not drunk stunning girl. But I am dizzy from your sweet perfumed hair. It has left me in a state where I am truly impaired. You say I am not delirious lovely lady. But your voice has left my mind burning with fantastic visions of you. You ravish my imagination with the words that slip from your tongue You call me a sober fool which is just untrue. To deny that I am under your influence is just cruel of you. But no matter what you say, I am intoxicated. If I am not drunk on drink, Then I am at least drunk on you. From the Desk of Donovan |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
This was a nice love poem. Welcome to the site. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Hey Donovan... Welcome to the halls of PIP. I have to say that I rather enjoyed this offering... so much so... that it inspired me to write my own piece. Keep 'em coming. Peace. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
it sounds as if you are seriously "under the influence"... nicely done... |
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Eldest Member
since 2010-06-15
Posts 177Alabama |
Must be a lovely girl to inspire such words |
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Donovan Callinan Junior Member
since 2010-08-01
Posts 37Omaha, Nebraska U.S. |
I don't know. I didn't write it with one person in mind. |
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