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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2010-07-25 10:32 PM


         maelstroms

lightning's broken flight
freezing chaos in a moment
love's timeless longing
in a fleeting life ...
whorling tempests
on a summer night

      --- b. e. adams (7/25/2010)
    

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katahdin
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1 posted 2010-07-25 10:35 PM


Nice!
Kat >^..^<

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2 posted 2010-07-26 10:59 AM


Nice + Beautiful = Fine Writing

Love this, Bruce.

A

2islander2
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by the sea
3 posted 2010-07-27 06:57 AM


very well described, just sensations .

regards

yann

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2010-07-30 11:08 PM


Short but very beautiful. Touches the heart, Bruce.
                          Ida

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5 posted 2010-08-01 01:25 AM




storms and love, poet

powerful


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