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In Solitaire
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In Solitaire |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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In Solitaire One step at a time, I have eased into a rhythym of summer's trace. In the light of the day you have captured me, a spirit beyond a face. No second thoughts to change the scheme. Just black and white revised. But the nature of this melody fragments the undisguised. It's the final thoughts in heat of the day, still pondering what might fare. As the sun loses hold it's tomorrow's gain, while dreaming in solitaire. M borrowing some phrases to inspire me "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine 'write' ! folks seem to be ignoring mine these days ... the most recent one is disappearing down the "P.I.P.-land" queue with only one comment/reply. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks, Bruce. I'll check it out.  M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
borrowed phrases or not ma'am, you have written a nice piece here.. there is both a bit of mystery around it as well as an honest look inside, should people want to read between their own lines and see what you have offered. enjoyed! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I enjoyed reading your poetry once again. It seems to flow so effortlessly from your pen! Great writing! miscellanea |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Nice. |
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