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rachaelfuchsberger
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0 posted 2010-07-21 05:07 PM



Democrat, Republican,
America could be ruled by Communism
And still taken over by Capitalism
And still have problems with Racism
And still be plagued with Sexism

Democrat, Republican,
We could be under a Dictatorship
And still have lack of Leadership
And still have rules for our Relationship
And still be denied rightful Ownership

Democrat, Republican,
We could be ruled by a Monarchy,
And still be frightened of Matriarchy
And still be oppressed by Patriarchy
And still be on the brink of Anarchy

Democrat, Republican,
It really matters not
For we as a whole care not
Because we don't know what it is to want not
Because a heart is what America has not

-Arana Darkwolf
Like a cat, I'll land on my feet. I always do.

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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2010-07-22 07:04 AM


well written poetically, but the content is obtuse.

the content about America (although you might believe it accurate) lacks insight.  

As a piece of America we are all America...I am, you are...they are..I have heart...a willingness to die to keep communisim and other ism's from destroying the freedom many of us have fought for.  I care about this country and will slap the crap out of anyone who tries to kick it around in any fashion.

I AM America...I have heart.


[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-23-2010 06:58 AM).]

rachaelfuchsberger
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2 posted 2010-07-23 03:00 AM


You, as an individual may have heart. I as an individual have heart. America as a whole and those who are supposed to lead it, do not.

-Arana Darkwolf
Like a cat, I'll land on my feet. I always do.

[This message has been edited by rachaelfuchsberger (07-23-2010 05:03 PM).]

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