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What America Has Not
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What America Has Not |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Democrat, Republican, America could be ruled by Communism And still taken over by Capitalism And still have problems with Racism And still be plagued with Sexism Democrat, Republican, We could be under a Dictatorship And still have lack of Leadership And still have rules for our Relationship And still be denied rightful Ownership Democrat, Republican, We could be ruled by a Monarchy, And still be frightened of Matriarchy And still be oppressed by Patriarchy And still be on the brink of Anarchy Democrat, Republican, It really matters not For we as a whole care not Because we don't know what it is to want not Because a heart is what America has not -Arana Darkwolf |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
well written poetically, but the content is obtuse. the content about America (although you might believe it accurate) lacks insight. As a piece of America we are all America...I am, you are...they are..I have heart...a willingness to die to keep communisim and other ism's from destroying the freedom many of us have fought for. I care about this country and will slap the crap out of anyone who tries to kick it around in any fashion. I AM America...I have heart. [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-23-2010 06:58 AM).] |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
You, as an individual may have heart. I as an individual have heart. America as a whole and those who are supposed to lead it, do not. -Arana Darkwolf Like a cat, I'll land on my feet. I always do. [This message has been edited by rachaelfuchsberger (07-23-2010 05:03 PM).] |
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