Open Poetry #46 |
Raindrops Of Love |
Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
My love and I strolled outside. In the flower garden. Beautiful and scenic. It was cloudy in the sky above. It began to shower raindrops of love. You and I darling became drenched. Wet with droplets from above. Love raindrops look good on your face. From your lips they give a sweet taste. In your hair they smell so sweet. Soft rain and you darling. Heaven's special treat. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very sweetly written Lamar funny how rain or water can enhance the beauty we see in another. |
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The Sky is Imagination Junior Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 25OK, US |
I really like this! It makes me think of the pleasant smell of wet grass and flowers. It also makes me think of a song from an anime called "Rain of Love". God I'm such nerd lol... |
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Eterne Member
since 2010-07-21
Posts 75Quebec, Canada |
Very lovely! |
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