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The Walk |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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 There he stood in the wheat of gold, my long tall drink of happiness, wearing a cookie-jar smile, Waves of dark brown chocolate hair, being teased by the fingers of the wind, his blueberry-stained eyes softly laughing, I moved in closer desiring to take a small sip, his hand said hello, cuddling mine, together, we walked, through the fragrant woods of rain-drenched pines. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VIVA ... those "fragrant woods of rain-drenched pines (!)" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dreamlike walk deeply romantic and very lovely imagery you evoke here, dear ARH! A joy to read. Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This was absolutely beautiful and poetically written. ~ I loved the ending, such a peaceful way to end a short, sweet poem. Mmmm, that tingling smell of soaked pine   ARCTIC WIND |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
awww...so sweet of you... ~hugs ARH  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
AW~check your email!!!! lol... |
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